Ayyyy Natasha, I heart it. >:) Anywayz the story explains a lot of texture like how u said when I stepped the land it felt like the wave of relief.... like u srs XD
I loved how u put so much work into this story good job, keep up the good work in the future and keep writing things like these because I would love to read more :) It's really good and fresh, you plz do more things like these because I am interested!! Full stop.
O im very sorry but u have to improve on shortening ur story but making us think its a long story if u know wut Im saying. Its okay to do it that long bcuz people are quite interested in it but for me I feel like its boring to read long stories not being negative or anything but plz maybe next time :)
Ayyyy Natasha, I heart it. >:)
ReplyDeleteAnywayz the story explains a lot of texture like how u said when I stepped the land it felt like the wave of relief.... like u srs XD
I loved how u put so much work into this story good job, keep up the good work in the future and keep writing things like these because I would love to read more :) It's really good and fresh, you plz do more things like these because I am interested!! Full stop.
ReplyDeleteO im very sorry but u have to improve on shortening ur story but making us think its a long story if u know wut Im saying.
ReplyDeleteIts okay to do it that long bcuz people are quite interested in it but for me I feel like its boring to read long stories not being negative or anything but plz maybe next time :)